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Feedback: Science

Provided on April 18, 2025 at 2:15 PM
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Lab report needs revision

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The hypothesis section is incomplete. Please add more detail about what you expected to happen and why. The data collection is excellent, but the conclusion needs to connect back to your original hypothesis.

Specifically, I'd like to see:

  • A clearer statement of what you predicted would happen
  • The scientific reasoning behind your prediction
  • In the conclusion, an explicit statement about whether your results supported your hypothesis
  • An explanation of why the results did or did not match your expectations

The experimental procedure and data collection were very well done. Once these revisions are complete, this will be an excellent lab report.

What to do next:

  1. Review the feedback with your student
  2. Help them revise the hypothesis section with more detail
  3. Ensure the conclusion connects back to the original hypothesis
  4. Have your student resubmit the revised lab report
  5. Mark the revision as completed using the toggle below

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